She cried last night

She was dead inside

Sorrow and grief, all she had beside

She had no purpose to live her life

Her husband left her, her parents died

She had no means to exist to survive

She had no purpose to live her life

With sadness and pain she oughtย to die

Before she could jump

She heard the sound, a baby cry

She helped the baby and felt delight

Now she has a purpose to live her life


Writing in respond to today’s one word prompt ” Purpose“.

For the first time I’m writing some poetry, ย I really liked this word “purpose”. If there is any mistake do tell me in comments below.

Also share what was the point in life that has changed you completely?

Thank you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Categories: life

29 Comments

Fernanda Guevara · June 2, 2016 at 2:31 pm

Oww, really good post. I liked the ending a lot ๐Ÿ˜Š

    Aki · June 3, 2016 at 10:59 am

    Thank you, I’m glad that you like my poem

chris jensen · June 2, 2016 at 2:35 pm

Wow, the magick of children…

Strikes again!

Beautiful piece…

chris

    Aki · June 3, 2016 at 10:59 am

    Thank you so much!!

uma197 · June 2, 2016 at 3:14 pm

yep, kids would do it. check out my blog and find out my purpose and my take on the word purpose. No mistakes hun.

    Aki · June 3, 2016 at 10:58 am

    Thank you dear.. oh yes I’d like to Check your respond!!

R 'I' P · June 2, 2016 at 4:08 pm

It’s a lovely poem! Prompt ‘Purpose’ carried very well, indeed!

    Aki · June 3, 2016 at 10:57 am

    Thank you so much for the complement!!

vibhash · June 2, 2016 at 4:15 pm

Beautiful poetry ……

DarShu · June 2, 2016 at 5:10 pm

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    Aki · June 3, 2016 at 10:56 am

    Thank you!!
    sure I’ll check..

flyingcolours603 · June 2, 2016 at 7:39 pm

it is beautiful an your right purpose makes us go own

marlsjbadventure · June 2, 2016 at 10:44 pm

Well written poem! Perhaps the woman hearing the baby cry in the poem may feel like she’ll have a baby of her own someday. That’s the impression I get from it. I think the moral of the term ‘purpose’ is that everyone came to exist on this world to achieve something. Despite the hardships, we as humans will evolve and hopefully learn from the mistakes of previous generations.

    Aki · June 3, 2016 at 10:56 am

    Thank you so much for a lovely compliment! Oh this line is cool “woman hear the baby cry” I’d like to add this in my poem.
    You are right! Everything thing, moment, person has some purpose in this world… We all must focus on our goals.

amberisis · June 3, 2016 at 6:46 am

I think we all sometimes feel like this, but then we think about those that need us. My purpose is always my children, and recently myself, I owe myself to be the best me I can be.

    Aki · June 3, 2016 at 10:43 am

    Yes at times we feel distress and you’re right we must stay positive. I’m glad you’ve a wonderful purpose!!! ๐Ÿ™‚ thank you for sharing your thoughts.

mySestina · June 3, 2016 at 5:43 pm

I cant not believe this is your first.. it is really beautiful and the theme is amazing… A baby, a life.. a purpose… just wow

    Aki · June 3, 2016 at 5:44 pm

    Oh really!!! that’s really sweet of you ๐Ÿ™‚ I adore you as a poet “senior”. ๐Ÿ˜€ this compliment means a lot .

      mySestina · June 3, 2016 at 5:45 pm

      I really mean the words i said.. the emotions in your poem were true and selfless… I loved the baby part.. beautiful

        Aki · June 3, 2016 at 5:47 pm

        Thank you dear!! I am glad to know that I have written it well.. ๐Ÿ™‚

          mySestina · June 3, 2016 at 5:48 pm

          ๐Ÿ™‚ keep writing

          Aki · June 3, 2016 at 5:49 pm

          Sure, I really enjoyed while writing this ๐Ÿ™‚ Selection of word, rhyming and executing thoughts in few words really a pleasant experience ..

          mySestina · June 3, 2016 at 5:50 pm

          writing is an experience… it is pleasurable… it is peaceful.. mesmerizing…

          Aki · June 3, 2016 at 5:50 pm

          A LOT!!

sudo11 · June 5, 2016 at 10:25 pm

Well versed..

    Aki · June 5, 2016 at 10:31 pm

    Thank you:)

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