Yesterday while reading posts I read a beautiful title “would you remain mine” I opened that post written by my dear friend mysestina and continued reading it. I was so mesmerised and felt like reading more and thankfully she has written its sequel. Mysestina has beautiful poems, her poems are so natural and close to my heart.

here are her beautiful poems:

Would You remain Mine

when my heart be relieved of its job

bringing the flow of red fluid to a halt

when the vision in my eyes will fail

pretty picture of your face will not reach my brain

the scent of your body will illuminate me no more

my ears would refuse to hear your gleeful laughs

when i will no more be able to taste your tongue

my sense of touch will not feel your hand on mine

i wonder about the day i shall depart

would you still love me like you do now

would you still remain mine?


YES, I would remain yours, even if death do us part

my love, O my love

how it pains me as you depart for heaven

consoling my bleeding heart I shall cry

I let my tears to fall forever

readying myself to bear the pain

holding you in my arms so safely

I watch your gentle spirit relieving your frame

there’s only one thing I am craving to assure

I shall never free me, from your love so deep

the way I look at you now with my affection

I shall only open my eyes to see your face

I shall utter my words only for you

to answer your anxiety in this moment

I give you my word

I would

yes I would remain yours

even if death do us part

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Thank you once again mysestina, keep writing and making us smile with your amazing poems.

Categories: life


The Analyzed Life · June 8, 2016 at 12:33 pm

Beautiful:) thanks for sharing

Aki · June 8, 2016 at 12:35 pm

Yes this very beautiful.
You are welcome!! 🙂

Keith Haney · June 8, 2016 at 1:32 pm

That made me smile and cry. Thanks for sharing.

vibhash · June 8, 2016 at 2:21 pm

So nice written ,its so real and gives goosebumps while reading….
yes I would remain yours

even if death do us part………………..its touching

Aki · June 8, 2016 at 2:51 pm

Yes, very nice. It’s my favourite poem.

Aki · June 8, 2016 at 2:53 pm

Yes all those words are really astonishing, mysestina has best selection of words.
You are welcome.

mySestina · June 8, 2016 at 2:57 pm

Dear Aki.. thanks for sharing. I am so glad that all fellow bloggers are enjoying the poems.. Makes me cry tears of joy…loads of love

Aki · June 8, 2016 at 3:00 pm

You have written it so nicely, that’s making us love your poems:) thank you for writing amazing poems , best of luck for further awesomeness;!!

vibhash · June 8, 2016 at 3:01 pm


mySestina · June 8, 2016 at 3:09 pm

and to you too my dear.. i was checking your awesome blog today… will come back for more

Aanchal · June 8, 2016 at 3:17 pm

This is just so beautiful 🙂
You nailed it!
Thank you.

domainofshane23 · June 8, 2016 at 4:19 pm

Very enchanting

Aki · June 8, 2016 at 6:25 pm

Yes, it is:)

Aki · June 8, 2016 at 6:31 pm

Yes it is very beautiful!!
You are welcome:)

Fernanda Guevara · June 8, 2016 at 6:49 pm

Really beautiful poems, the second one specially is so heartwarming. And I think it’s awesome of you to show appreciation! 😊

Aki · June 8, 2016 at 6:51 pm

Indeed!!! 🙂
Thank you so much 🙂 I feel we all must acknowledge and appreciate the best and creative things..

Fernanda Guevara · June 8, 2016 at 6:56 pm

Yes, I believe so too! I think this serves as a great boost of confidence and motivation to keep improving 🙂

Aki · June 8, 2016 at 7:00 pm

Exactly.. I really appreciate everything creative! It’s like a gift from nature, that how beautifully it is created..
Thank you for sharing your thoughts:)

Fernanda Guevara · June 8, 2016 at 7:11 pm

No problem! 😊
I think the same way more if it’s something that really speaks to me or I can relate to. 😄

Aki · June 8, 2016 at 7:16 pm

That’s great! ! We are same in this situation:)

Aki · June 9, 2016 at 12:00 pm

Thank you

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